The story … to be continued

It was a dark night. While I was walking back home, I suddenly saw a tall man, who was walking towards me.He had got a black cap he had got a knife in his right hand. He was walking very fast and I was really frightened. Suddenly a black car appeared next to me …

Monika K.; Poland

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A man stepped out of the car and now there was a man on either side of me. The second man pulled out some rope and the first man spoke in a deep, angry voice; “You are coming with us.” He grabbed me and threw me into the car …


Tom H.; England


Next, we drove to a dark forest. I was frightened. ‘What are they going to do with me?’ – I thought. The two men took me to a wooden house. While I was crying, one of them was phoning somewhere and talking about ransom …


Wojtek, Poland

I couldn’t feel my hands and legs. The rope they had tied around them was so tight. My heart was beating fast and I was sweating with anxiety. Who knew where I was? Who could help me? Who were these people? …..
I listened to what the guy on the phone was saying. With a shock I realized that I knew that voice. Of course ! Why had I been so stupid !!

Frasier R. England

Now, when I knew who had kidnapped me, my problem was bigger. This person bullied me when I was young. My childchood became a nightmare because of THIS PERSON! How did he find me? When I was thinking about my situation, one of the men came to me. He was standing in the shadow, but I managed to see his stupid smile. He went out from the darkness and I saw his face. – Frank…. –I whispeared. ….

Alicja, Poland

“I was wondering how long it would take you to recognize me,” he snarled.
Haw, haw haw, hah, hah , hah ….”
His evil laughed echoed around the empty room. I felt very alone.

Toby M.

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13 Responses to “The story … to be continued”

  1.   tunde
    January 5th, 2006 | 3:30 pm

    he had a big smile on his face one associated with success and why shouldnt he consider himself successful he ha d bullied me and now he was going to make money of me i thought to my self lord why had i become franks rag and the thought of being a rag filled me with anger that made me want to hurt him and possibly kill him

  2.   Simon
    January 12th, 2006 | 1:01 pm

    ..they were my homeboyz in they BMW. My people were
    shooting to that man. They have killed him. I get into the BMW. When we were driving home my cell phone rang.
    It was my my homeboy Konrado. He asked me if I’ve
    any plans tonight. I said yes. When we went to my hause I was verry tired. I feel sick, so I went to bed.

  3.   Sky
    May 28th, 2006 | 10:02 am

    He left the room and a mixture of fear and panic gripped me. What would he return with? This man, this face I know intimately from my past, the one i had tried so hard to forget. He had come back to haunt me and I had only one desperate thought: Escape

  4.   Marcin
    September 18th, 2006 | 5:03 pm

    I stopped and didn’t know what to do. Then two tall men wearing black woollen cap got out of the car and put me into the car’s boot. They told me to be quiet and nothing wrong happens to me.
    „To be continued”.

  5.   Piotrek
    September 24th, 2006 | 4:33 pm

    I woke up next day. In front of my bed was men. I asked him:
    -What are you doing here???
    -Mhhhhh…. good question. I come for you.

  6.   fausia,kinia,karola
    September 26th, 2006 | 12:45 pm

    He was tall and his voice was terrible. He reminded me Frankenstein!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I started screamed and ran away.

  7.   MaDziA
    September 26th, 2006 | 12:48 pm

    I very scared!! I don’t know what I must do…….
    I was very happy because this man is walked near me and
    went away :D :D

  8.   IrMinKaA
    September 26th, 2006 | 12:53 pm

    I felt very exicited!! But later this man walk to me and
    to hammer smth into my stomach. Next, I woke up and I
    thinked “THis is only bad dreams” :D

  9.   Fausia
    October 4th, 2006 | 5:55 pm

    It was long night, and this nightmare. Horrible. But today seems to be better. Sun is shining, people are happy. And I have got big cake in fridge. Today it’s my birthday and I have got big party in club near my house:)

  10.   James
    November 4th, 2006 | 6:11 am

    Six o’clock came and my party guests arrived. Piotrek and his friend Karola was there. She wore her new black dress and red shoes; and then came Mrs Kukulka and with her was Mr Wilk. He was wearing a strange yellow shirt and bright green trousers. It was acold night but he had sandals on his feet. I made no comment.
    “Thank you for inviting us,” he said. “Here is a present for you.”

    He handed me a small blue bag and smiled anxiously ….

  11.   Henryk
    January 4th, 2007 | 2:44 pm

    I opened the bag, out popped 4 little mice.

  12.   Henryk
    January 4th, 2007 | 3:20 pm

    Then suddenly all the guests at my party disappeared! And i heard a loud continous ringing sound like an alarm clock! Yes! that what it was an alarm clock! But where is that sound coming from I thought to myself and what happened to my guests. I gradually moved towards the loud ringing sound. My knees were shaking with fear, sweat was dripping down my face and my heart felt like it was sinking further down my chest. It was pounding like a drum. The ringing grew louder and louder. Then suddenly……………….

  13.   Henryk
    January 11th, 2007 | 2:58 pm

    And they all lived happily ever after.

    THE END.

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